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September 30th, 2005 by Michelle

Yesterday, I received a note from Ericka Lutz at Literary Mama, suggesting a small edit on a story of mine they’re running in October. It was a very good edit, so precise and insightful, and, in a way, so obvious, that I was surprised I hadn’t thought of it myself. I told Ericka to go ahead with the edit, noting, “Why didn’t I think of that?” In response, she quoted a zen aphorism: “The eye that sees but cannot see itself; the sword that cuts but cannot cut itself,” adding, “That’s why, I guess, it’s often helpful to have an editor…”

The exercise: With as subjective an eye as possible, go over a story that you think is finished , looking for at least one edit that, in hindsight, seems so right-on as to be obvious.

Posted in Ephemera, Writing Exercises

3 Responses

  1. Bill, "the Wildcat"

    My wife and I co-write. I’ve often joked that it’s like having an editor within the writing process. Of course, that also leads to disagreements. Hopefully, I can keep this quote in mind the next time I resist an idea of my wife’s.

  2. Anonymous

    Oh, my, you should rarely resist an idea of your wife’s. You get many stories/books/articles, only one wife. It’s in your best interests to please her. My husband is my first editor for everything I write. He happens to be very good at it. More importantly, he’s very good at all things spousal, so I pretty much say, “yes! yes! yes!” to almost all of his edits.

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Sans Serif began as a literary blog in September of 2005. Over time it has evolved into a more eclectic venture, with posts on books, politics, current events, literary happenings in the San Francisco Bay Area, publishing news, the writing life, and writing exercises. This blog is written by Michelle Richmond, author of four books of fiction: The Year of Fog, Dream of the Blue Room, The Girl in the Fall-Away Dress, and No One You Know (forthcoming, 2008).

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