Writing exercise – characterization
Here is one of the most economical sentence pairings I’ve come across in a while: He couldn’t remember his wife clearly–only the hats she wore. How surprised she would be at hearing from him after this long while; there had been one letter written by each of them since the boy died. Graham Greene, The Power and the Glory
The exercise:
Compose two sentences in which a great deal is revealed about a character. Like the sentences above, yours should suggest something fundamental about the character’s inner life and/or relationships, as well as revealing something significant about his past.
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I just thought I would give this an amateur try.
She was standing, eyes faded, skin gray with fatigue
stirring by a stove and while flies buzzed overhead she blinked hard and stirred, unaware. Her mind drifted to a heartbeat, a joy, running with a child’s delight, and she smiled faintly at the memory.